The time of life is short and sweet when loves and lips like ours meet
love and life should not waste
the fight for hapiness is but a race
the truth is clear the end draws near to dawdle is not the way save baby steps for your first day
Nice! I really like this. It really flows together, and the content sticks. The only thing that I can think of to criticise is the spelling. One word, actually. 'Dawdle' is spelled with the a before the w. Just switch those and it'll be perfect.
I crave Skittles. And I hate Skittles. Huh, weird.
ReplyDeleteNice! I really like this. It really flows together, and the content sticks. The only thing that I can think of to criticise is the spelling. One word, actually. 'Dawdle' is spelled with the a before the w. Just switch those and it'll be perfect.
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